Another SAT practice essay I wrote in English. I have to say that I definitely liked my first one better. I give this one a 4. The other one a 6.
What do you stand for?
What is the most important thing to you in your life right now? What do you value most? What are you morals? What do you believe in? It is hard to state your morals when you don't really understand what they are. In many schools, morals are hardly discussed, and social issues scarcely brought up. If schools don't help students to decide what they stand for, how will they know what to do when they are faced with making important, moral-based decisions later on in life? This is why I think that moral choices and social issues should be discussed in schools.
I have been to a school that allows discussion of morals and social issues and a school that doesn't allow it. after looking back on challenges I have been faced with at each, I know that attending a school that makes moral discussion a part of their curriculum really helped me to make better decisions. For example, a couple of weeks ago, I visited the World Trade Center grounds in New York. After my visit, I was able to discuss the sacrifices made and all the feelings that must have been felt during the tragic event with my friends from school. I was also able to talk about what was happening now with the resulting war, and my moral standings on it. I felt proud that I knew where I stood with the social issues our world is confronted with.
At my previous school, when the September 11 tragedies occurred, all we got was information. We were never even presented with the idea of sharing our feelings or reflections on the event. I know that if I still attended that school today, I would not know where I stood or how I felt about September 11 or the war in Iraq.
On the other hand, education is important. If people did not have educations, how would jobs be determined? We need academics to help us advance on to the next level. But at the same time, academics cannot help us to determine what kind of world we live in and how we live in it. Thus, while academics are important, a moral education is absolutely necessary to lead a proper life.